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The world is like the moon. There are times that you see its beauty. There are times that you see its darkness. There are even times when it is shrouded by the clouds. Reach for the stars. Then you will always see its beauty. -My father

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My Story - Part 3

Posted by JinNJuice - June 16th, 2009


I haven't posted my story in a while. Sorry, for those who have waited for it.

Before you read, keep in mind that I had some inspirations. You should also read in a well lit room, and make sure you have enough free time. I had originally wrote this on college ruled line paper. For previous parts, check my previous posts. Ok then. Enjoy.

Part 1 Part 2 <--- Check first if you have not read it.

Compass
Part 3 - Fighting

A large shockwave blasts most of the seated people, however it didn't affect anyone on the upper floors. They begin to jump down.
"Inoue, now!"
I hold her waist area tightly as she has instructed. I had feared the dark, falling sky descending to attack us. It seemed that only Katsuki could protect me.
"Ready... Go!"
At that moment, Katsuki dashes towards the entrance that we had entered through before. Her speed and agility are incredible. Several groups have reached the bottom floor and are already blockading the entrance. Several more are dashing towards us.
"Inoue, this will get loud!"
Lightning bolts strike down on our surrounding area, repelling many nearby. It creates some flames around us. Katsuki dashes away once again, but she halts soon after, because the exit had been sealed off.
"Where do they get these?"
Several pursuers arrive at our location. At that moment, I noticed that they have fangs. I realized that they are vampires.
"Shito should not underestimate Shinso!"
I recognized one of them.
"Nanashi?"
She expresses sadness and anger, as if she holds regret and disappointment.
"I'm sorry..."
"Ehh...?"
A man jumps forward while igniting flames on his fists, aided by shards of ice that follow beside him. Katsuki counters by shattering the ice shards and guarding with her fist. The man jumps back.
"Heh. Not bad."
He has short, yellow hair partially covered with a black bandana. He wears a brown leather trench coat over a white shirt and green jeans.
"The name's Akayoru Dio."
He stands next to a tall woman. She has long, blue hair and pink streaks. She wears a blue jean jacket over a black t-shirt and blue jeans. The jacket only extends down below the breast area.
"I am called Mizuka Yuki."
"Enough talk! We have to kill him!"
Dio dashes from side to side towards me and strikes.
An electric field surrounds me and drives him back.
"Ghh! What was that?!"
Everyone gives me a look of disbelief. I am surprised myself. Then, Katsuki realizes something.
"Of course! You must have taken in some of my magic."
Could that be some form of connection?
"But, you might not be able to control it yet."
Yuki steps in.
"So, will he be able to protest himself again?"
Shards of ice form near my feet. One shard cuts my left arm. Bolts of lightning flow out of my arm and shatter the ice. Then, Katsuki dashes in to strike Yuki with a fist. Dio intercepts with a roundhouse kick, however Katsuki slides under on her side and continues towards Yuki. A wall of ice blockades the attack, and Dio jumps to stomp Katsuki. She kicks on the ice to slide back and avoid Dio. He continues his assault with a slide kick. Katsuki stands and jumps with her hands to attack with a midair axe kick. Surprisingly, her attack impacts on his chest. Then, she grabs his face and slams him high on the blockade behind me. Massive amounts of lightning flow out of her arm and assail him. It appears as if he is defeated. However, he creates a combusted ball of flames and causes an explosion that pushes Katsuki and I away. Dio dashes out of the flames and strikes Katsuki with a hook to the stomach. The impact pushes her further away. He dashes again behind her and strikes again with an uppercut to the back. It causes her to fly midair. He jumps abover and strikes again with a two-handed slam dunk. This time, she evades it and counters with a shockwave. The shockwave forms some distance between them. They both land on their feet as they fall. Katsuki takes a stance while Dio becomes enraged.
I had forgotten, but Nanashi is still here.
"He is at his limit."
Dio id about to attack again, but Yuki stops and holds him.
"That's enough. If you continue, you might burn yourself alive."
Dio holds her in return. It seems like they are lovers. They both leave...
Katsuki walks towards me.
"We should escape while we can."
The blockade had been demolished by the explosion. Katsuki holds me, and we escape...
Nanashi watches us.
"What am I doing?"
We hop on top of tall buildings. After all that happened, I'm used to it. I think, however, that Katsuki is straining herself. She seems weak and fatigued.
"Katsuki, what's wrong?"
We land on another building. Then, she collapses on me. It causes to fall on my back. She lies on top of me now. I can feel her breath on my neck, her hands on my shoulders, her breasts on my chest, her waist on my hands, her legs close to mine. I'm too worried about her to think about our position.
"Katsuki! Are you ok?!"
She places her forehead on mine.
"Can you feel it?"
"Ehh?!"
I can feel something!
"Your heart. Does it feel like it's pulled to me?"
... Now that she mentions it, my whole body feels a pull to her. Even my sense have this feeling.
"... I feel it."
"It's a magical bond. We formed a contract when we met."
"Why are you telling me this?"
"... I need you... "
She starts to lick my neck. She digs her fingers into my shoulders. I hold her tightly because of the pain. She continues her caressing for a while. Then, she asks.
"Is it ok?"
"What do you mean?"
"I need your blood. I can't regenerate my magic as quickly."
"... You don't...-"
"-Please. I need strength."
"You don't have to ask."
"Inoue... Then, here I go."
"I reveal my neck to her. As she gets closer, her breathing gets harder. I hold her close to me as a sign of preparation. Then, she bites me.
"Does it hurt?"
"It's fine."
"I feel a little better. Just a bit more."
I nod and allow her to feed on me again. We hold each other close.
Another presence appears from a shadow. A man with a deep voice.
"Target aquired."
Everything he wears is black. His hoody, his jeans, his gloves, his shoes, his glasses, even his hair is black. His eyes are covered by his glasses, but most likely they are black as well. Only his skin is pale.
"Yamizaki Kuroko."
Judging by is image, his ability involves darkness.
"Yoshinori Katsuki, the Crimson cannot withstand our powers. Surrender now, or face death."
We stand up. Katsuki crosses her arms
"You speak in a formal manner. However, you, as a Vermillion, underestimate us."
"The Crimson holds impressive abilities, indeed. Still, it is no match for us."
"A stubborn man will never understand. You should realize the situation for your own good."
"It is not I who has misunderstood. We have far more tactics than you."
"A plan is useless the moment it fails."
"Well said. However, that applies to the both of us."
"This conversation is running in circles. Shall we fight to settle this?"
"Very well. Prepare yourself."
Kuroko vanishes into a shadow form. I step back while Katsuki steps forward. Then, a shadow darts from the left through her shoulder. Another flies from behind to her right leg. A third comes from below to her stomach. She is still weakened, and now she is hurt again.
"You cannot harm what you cannot see. To trust the world with your eyes is naïve."
Katsuki is holding her left shoulder. She blinks and her eyes become red. Then, she dashes to her right and punches thin air. Looking carefully, Kuroko appears, guarding against her fist. She smirks.
"Wise words. Still, as I said before, you, as a Vermillion, underestimate us. We can see beyond mere illusions, and we can sense the slightest changes. You should realize the situation for your own good."
Kuroko seems furious. He knocks her away, Then, he removes his glasses. His eyes are white as snow.
"It is not I who has misunderstood."
A bright light shines from his eyes, along with a high pitch ringing sound. I cannot see or hear, and I feel paralyzed. After a while, I become stable again. However, I feel a sharp pain in my stomach. I can hear blood spewing. I'm losing consciousness.
"The world is formed by a spiral. Yin and Yang. "ArayaShiki". Remember this."
Katsuki looks back at me. She calls out to me, but I can't hear her.
-------------------- And so... -------------------- I fall...

To be continued...


Comments

WOW..., again.
this is such a good story, you realy have talent in writing stories.
each line is breath taking and makes you want to read more.
in one word just AWSOME!!

I'll be sure to put more. -KN

not bad sounds like a childs story tho

It does? I wouldn't think so, because there are violence, blood, and sexual content (or stuff like that). What are children into nowadays? Perhaps it seems as such, because I have not used curse words, sex, or killing. However, I do plan on adding those into the story as it progresses.

Still, I am glad that you enjoyed my unfinished story. -KN

I really like it. However using present tense makes the phrasing awkward.

Stories are always in present tense. -KN

Also to comment on kikoforce's comment. Sadly there are kindagarteners that know a fuck load about sex and violence. Atleast where I live, the wonder of yuppies parents letting their children use the internet unwatched.

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