awsome story:O
i love those storys, although i'm more a werewolf type.
it's verry interesting, i'll look forwards to the next part.
i totaly agree with Smidly, this would make a best-seller is it was a book:D i'm sure of that.
The world is like the moon. There are times that you see its beauty. There are times that you see its darkness. There are even times when it is shrouded by the clouds. Reach for the stars. Then you will always see its beauty. -My father
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I was thinking about putting other things, such as werewolves and elves. I would have to find a way to fit them in first.
Smidly
You should change "Not one part of my body moves a single inch" to "I got a fucking huge boner".
But in all seriousness, I read the whole thing and I liked it alot for a chapter. If it was a book I would buy it, or atleast check it out at the library.
JinNJuice (Updated )
Sexy story, no? I'm still writing it. I let a couple of my friends read it, and they want to read more.
Will put part 2 up later.